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PROLOGUE

His eyes are alluring so dark…
His eyes are twinkling like…
A lightening spark…

His eyes blazes like…
A scorching flame…
His mouth is yet…
The sensual flame…

His tongue is a silver…
makes me shiver…
His body is like a panther…
hovers me likes appetizer…

His body is a sculptor…
carved with patience…
His nature is so soft…
like a cotton fibre…

He’s like a forbidden fruit…
which i wish to be mine…
at any cost…

He evokes the untamed desires in me so powerfully…
which can make my body blaze anticipatedly…

Poem By Me

Here i present another desire story which binds Maan and Geet so powerfully with the most sensual and most passionate and most untamedly desireful love with full of brewing desires and sensations.Its another dark story.Hope u like it.

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Character Sketch

Maan Singh Khurana-ruthless businessman,most eligible bachelor of the country.Private man.

Geet Handa-sweet innocent but orphan.She dont have her parents and orphanage is her home.

Other characters are introduced there and then!

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Maan comes to the present world still stroking Geet’s back.He had a million questions inside his mind but also felt pity hearing Karan’s state.His eyes welled up and tears silently poured down from his eyes which was fell over on Geet’s face for which she got up to get her love crying.Geet moaned,”Maan!”Maan looked up and her eyes said what is it when he smashed his lips on hers and soon he loved her gently trying to lessen his pain and she surrendered herself understanding his turmoil.

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Before i start the new track,i want to confess something.I was reading crossfire series by Sylvia Day who is writing the 4th book in this series but i have read first three books.There she mentions Eva’s past,in that she was abused by her step brother Nathan Barker.I got the idea from there and tried to frame Nathan’s character on Karan.From Sylvia i got this idea but some ppl thought i hv copied someone’s concept and that was an issue those days but it got settled in its way.So here is the piece of information i want to share with u guys,becoz i dont want to be accused once again.

PART 64

A week has passed since Maan met Karan and he attended his funeral too which was quiet.Maan had still not mentioned abt Karan’s warning to Geet.But Geet was once again suspicious seeing his changed behaviour.He chuckled to himself turning the page of his file when he was cornered in his room and he was bombarded with the questions by Geet.He was working from the home only due to Geet’s health.He smiled once again seeing her cute pouting face which were pouting becoz he wasnt speaking anything!He was sitting in his outhouse office where his inferiors were doing their work intently.He saw the empty chair of Sasha.His mind is racing thinking abt Karan’s warning.For what reason he was saying to stay away from her.She had gone to her native taking one week holiday and hasnt returned yet.

Lunch break was announced and Maan walked towards the mansion to get the most serene and most adorable sight.There sat Geet on the swing and was bending front and pouting cutely.He thought,”What’s she doing here?” and then thought,”May be she was enjoying the garden view!”He went near her to listen her cursing programme.For whom she was cursing under her breath.He heard the soft plea to god,”Hey babaji,why u made me so short!Look at me,when i sit back comfortably on the swing then my feet wont touch the ground and when i sit forward then i cant able to sit properly on the swing.U r testing ur child once again!Baby’s wish was to sit on the swing,but i cant able to shake it myself!U have become cruel babaji!”

Hearing this Maan burst into laughter and Geet looked up and saw Maan laughing pleasantly for she pouted once again and cursed him under breath.Maan heard that too and he more laughed hearing her pick of words.Geet snapped angrily,”If u dont want to help me then dont laugh at me!”Maan once again burst into laughter and this time she too saw him laughing holding his stomach and she too smiled seeing his cute laugh.When he turned towards her then she made a face and lowered her lashes.He held her chin and said huskily,”Jaan,dont lower ur eyes,these eyes always see me with proud not becoz of complaint!”She stared at his eyes and he asked huskily,”U wish to swing on the swing!”She said excitedly,”Not me but baby!”She rubbed her flat tummy cutely.

Maan lifted her in his arms while she snaked smiling broadly.He sat on the swing and made her sit on his lap and moved his feet which touched the ground easily and pulled and pushed slowly.She saw his feet with widened eyes.He slowly swung the swing when she said,”Faster Maan!”Maan said,”Na na jaan,u feel dizzy!”She said with an enormous trust in her eyes towards him,”Nothing will happen to me when u r present around me!”Maan bent and gave swift chaste kiss to her petal lips.She blushed profusely while he fastened the pace.She hid her face inside his neck and relaxed completely clinging to his rough body.

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She closed her eyes feeling solace inside his arms when he kissed her head softly.He too closed his eyes feeling his jaan near his heart.After sometime his stomach grumbled loudly for she snapped open her eyes and immediately looked up to bang her head to his rough chin.She winced in pain cutely rubbed her head for he glared and said,”Careful jaan!Are u hurt?Is it paining?”Immediately she smashed her lips on his to shut him.He groaned and took charge of the kiss.He kissed her passionately till she whimper for breath and at once he released her swollen lips which was already swollen due to his kiss.She blushed profusely but said,”Maan,u r hungry!”He dint answer him but pecked her forehead and spoke,”Dont worry,i will hv lunch!But let me fulfill my both babies wish!”Geet snapped angrily,”Am not a baby Maan!”Maan sweetly said,”Yes u r jaan!”And pecked her lips.She pouted ever so cutely but said,”Maan,go and have some lunch!Am hungry too!”He sighed and immediately lifted her standing in easy pace.She was shocked seeing his comfortableness and snaked her arms around his neck.

He slowly walked towards the dining hall holding her securely.She nodded dismissively seeing her possessive hubby.He gently made her sit and then spoke to Nakul to serve the lunch.Nakul served the lunch and went away leaving them alone.Then Maan lifted her and made to sit on his lap and took the bite and fed her lovingly.Geet said,”Maan,u eat first,then i will eat afterwards!”He said holding her waist tightly,”U r forgetting out daily routine!”He smashed his lips on her taking another bite of food and fed her from his lips.After their lunch she bit his neck harshly.He winced in pain and glared at her.She pouted once again,”What to do?U arouse me like hell and i need to ease my breath so i bit u!”

He chuckled and she pouted once again and she walked towards the room to have an afternoon nap.Maan saw her sleeping peacefully in her room and walked away towards his office.At evening he entered his room to get another adorable view.There sat Geet knitting small sweater for baby.Maan looked her face which has pleasant smile and she was cutely knitting sweater giving her best smile.His lips elevated to the smile and he saw the two needles.He came behind her and immediately hugged her.She was shocked but relaxed seeing him.

Geet said smiling broadly,”Aap aagaye,i will bring black coffee to u!”Maan nodded while she walked past him towards the kitchen and he went to freshen up.He came back rubbing his face and hands when his eyes fell on kroshaw.He took it when she entered holding a tray.She saw him intently seeing the kroshaw and answered,”That’s kroshaw,it is used to knit sweater!”He nodded but still he was a bit thoughtful.She handed the coffeeful cup to him and she sat herself beside him in the couch to sip her tea.After sometime he abruptly said,”Jaan,i want to knit sweater for my angel!”Geet was so shocked that she spit the tea which she has sipped from the cup and started coughing.He was shocked with this reaction but rubbed her back in soothing way.After wiping the tea off her lips she kept her another palm on his forehead and asked,”Maan r u ok?”

Maan asked curiously,”Why what happened to me?”Geet said,”U were thinking of knitting sweaters so i asked!”Immediately Maan understood and glared at her.He pouted,”Why?I cant knit sweaters for my angel?”Geet said,”Maan u dont know the patterns and u cant learn it in one day!”Maan said,”I will learn jaan…just u teach me basics!”Geet was abt to protest but he pleaded,”Please jaan,i want to be the part of the work which is done for my angel!”Geet smiled at him more broadly and pecked his lips to relax his mood and nodded yes to him.Geet took the kroshaw and said to tie a knot to one kroshaw to get the thread of rings.Maan did that like her.Then she started teaching knit pattern and then pearl pattern and then at abt 9 he was knitting the pattern sitting beside her cutely.It was fun for him as he was learning new things for his angel.

While knitting the sweater Geet saw his face which was so adorable and soft.He dint had any tension and she smiled broadly.After sometime,Geet asked abruptly,”Maan,why this mansion isnt having any or ur parents pictures?”Maan’s hands stiffened and his jaw tightened and he glared at her and spoke,”Dont talk abt it jaan!I dont want to spoil my mood!”Geet insisted,!But Maan,humaara baby ko toh pata chale ki yahi uske dada aur dadi hai!”Maan spoke,”Please Geet….!”But Geet cut across him and spoke,”Please Maan,for our angel’s sake tell me where ur parents pictures.He said,”They are dead!Do u understand?Dont ask my any question further!”He took the kroshaw and the wool and walked towards his study.Geet sighed seeing his anger but decided to get to know more abt his parents.

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He remembered all this incident glancing at an mango tree which was half-grown.Geet stirred and moaned as he was still inside her.He saw her uncomfortableness and immediately came outside making her wince slightly and made her sleep beside him tugging herself on his shoulder.She cutely cuddled up and her lips brushed to his left chest which made him groan softly.He chuckled seeing his innocent wify but got serious seeing her scared to death when she stood inside that mansion.Maan knew Veer gonna capture Karan and he wanted to give a piece of mind to not to eye his wify in future.He was boiling in anger when he got to know that she was captured by Karan from her car’s GPS system

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PART 63

Finally it was peace!Peace!……..Peace!……..is it a peace or the calmness before the storm.It was the full moon day which was spreading its rays inside the very same tree house.The moon’s rays was reflecting near the window of a dark room where a couple slept peacefully.Wait one of them is not asleep…still awake and is seeing the ceiling thoughtfully.On that time someone stirred beside him and more snuggled to him.He looked up to get an angelic face which had a cute smile.She was Geet who was sleeping inside her husband’s arms Maan Singh Khurana caressing her flat tummy and Maan isnt getting any sleep.May be becoz of the encounter which he had in the morning.He was summoned to the military hospital by Veer.He turned towards the moon light and saw the full moon intently.

On that time Geet felt restless and he stroked her back sensing it.She felt calm and snuggled closer still keeping her hand on her flat tummy as a barrier between them.He knew that she was dreaming of something which is making her restless.He slowly stroked her face and pecked her forehead.She felt his warmth spread inside her and she slept relaxed.Then he looked up once again to see the moon rays where he remembered today’s incident in hospital.

Few hours ago————->

Maan entered the hospital to get Angad in the reception who was waiting for Veer.Maan saw him and Angad for a second thought he’s not gonna hug or shower his love on him but to his utter shock Maan hugged him tight and asked,”How are u Angad?”Angad nodded yes answering his Q.On that time Veer came towards them and Maan spoke rudely,”Why u called me here Veer?I dont want to talk to him!Dont make me go in front of him,i may kill him from my bare hands!”Veer patted his back and spoke,”It was his last wish Maan,dont be so cruel!He has suffered a lot!”Maan spat angrily,”Suffer!Suffer!It would better he get to know the meaning of this word practically!I dont want to talk to him and that’s it!”Veer pleaded,”Please Maan,for me!”Maan was shocked to see Veer supporting him and meekly nodded to keep his best friend’s word.

Angad was the silent spectator while Veer asked,”Angad,do u have any objection too?”Angad said sadly,”Am keeping ur word too Veer like Maan!Right now neither am in the state to feel guilty of tampering Maan’s life nor pour out my anger on him as he’s the one who murdered my Anjali!Am totally numb Veer!Am afraid my next move may harm my friends once again and it may be the reason of the change on their life….but i will meet him,i dont have any objection!”Veer hugged both Maan and Angad as the tears poured down from his black eyes.Veer said still hugging them,”Am sure u guys will forgive him after hearing his story!”Both Maan and Angad saw each other trying to figure out the situation.

Veer led them to the ward where Karan was sleeping.When they entered on that time Karan opened his eyes to get his three friends who once loved him deeply.Now he get from them for him is only anger and disgust.He was the one who destroyed their friendship and today to meet him they were coming towards him together.Seeing this he felt peace and tears brimmed from his wide eyes.Both Maan and Angad saw him with disgust when they saw his tears.Maan asked rudely,”When u stop ur waterworks then call me,will come and listen to ur last piece of lie shit!”Karan was hurted hearing his words and Maan was turning to go when Veer stopped him,”Maan!”Maan closed his eyes and suppressed his anger and turned to face Karan.

Karan always admired his three friends who never failed to stand with him previously.Today they were disgusted to see his face.Karan had struggled for his life after having bullet in his forehead and heart to tell this truth to his beloved friends.Karan took oiff his Oxygen mask and spoke breathing heavily,”Am sorry for bothering u two Maan,Angad!But i wanted to tell u the truth!”Maan folded his hand across his chest and said bossily,”Shoot!”Karan asked water to Veer who poured some drops under his throat.

Karan spoke,”Angad,am sorry for keeping u in dark.I was not the one who forced Anjali but my father!”Angad screamed,”What?”He saw immediately towards Veer who nodded yes to him.Angad asked angrily,”What do u mean?”Karan said breathing heavily,”Do u guys remember the time when i went with my father?”Maan said,”From that time only u started acting weirdly and then u did that thing which me and Angad cant able to forgive u!”Karan nodded meekly but spoke,”It wasnt me Maan,Angad!It was my father!”

Both Angad and Maan was confused while Karan continued,”My father wasnt a normal person when he called me back in his life.He once met a mad scientist who was researching on human youth.He was researching how to remain younger after 60s and my father delighted to become his specimen.My father always had greediness to stay younger.That mad scientist promised to make him young but also he dint even know what will happen further if he turn my father younger.For that he wanted the stem cells of me and that’s why he took me telling lies!”Hearing this Angad and Maan were shocked.Maan spoke,”Very good,so u r telling lies now also!Karan,till now u dint learn anything in ur course of life!U r in deathbed but still u r telling lies!I dont believe u,Veer,to listen to this crap,u called me here!”Veer was abt to speak when Karan said meekly,”Maan,this is not lies,this is truth!”

Angad said angrily supporting Maan,”I do agree with Maan.Dont give the lies,we’ve proofs of it!”Karan said meekly,”That proofs was created by me to save my father!”Both Maan and Angad were shocked to hear this and Maan clapped his hands sarcastically smiling and spoke,”Perfect,so he’s trying to wiggle out of the punishment putting the blame on his father!Am done with him,am not gonna listen to his lies anymore!”Angad too nodded and stood to go away when Veer closed the door of the ward and locked it and pleaded,”Please Maan,Angad,just listen to him fully!”

Maan snarled,”Enough Veer,till now we listened to him that’s becoz u said it.But we cant listen to his lies anymore.Enough of that,and if i hear one more lies from him then i may kill him from my bare hands!Am stopping myself becoz i promised u that i wont take the law on my hands or else he would’ve become history till now!”Angad moved to snatch the keys from Veer which he threw outside the window immediately.Angad snarled,”Veer!”Veer pleaded,”Please!”Both Maan and Angad glared at Veer but he dint budge so they both went back to Karan.Karan continued immediately seeing them back,”That mad scientist got my stem cells and prepared the drug for my father.My father took it and he became energetic,not young which made my father furious.He thought he’s gonna seen like he was in 20s but seeing his appearance he cudnt get himself.Something poison was also present there.But that scientist got arrested due to his madness as he was the murderer of 15 innocent people.

Karan saw Maan and Angad who were listening him intently.He continued,”My father was in that medication only and day by day his mental state started to become unstable.He started to desire the girls.His lustful desires started to ooze.On that time to stable him i have attempted so much but every time he would’ve got victory.I decided to study Psychology and did doctorate too.But my father wasnt in the state of curing.I tried everything.That medicine which he swallowed with the help of that mad scientist dint had any cure.He started to desire girls every night and if he set loose then he would create havoc in the city.So i controlled him,i bounded him in chains but his lustful desires never got controlled and when i tried to find a cure trying to meet that mad scientist,on that time that man was hanged to death!I lost my last hope of curing my father.

Karan continued meekly,”I tried to stop him but he became uncontrollable.Then i decided to capture every girl who comes under my charm and would hypnotise her and let her to reach my father’s room.He would satisfy his desires and leave that girl.Sometimes he was so ferocious that he would kill the girl during satisfying his desires.Maan!Angad!I loved my father!After so many years he had open up to me to confess how much he loved me and missed me so much!”Tears poured down from his wide eyes which was gently wiped by Maan and Angad silently.Karan was happy and he continued,”His lustful desires started to become uncontrollable,he started to protest me!Thrice he had left the house freeing himself on that time only he saw Anjali,Veer’s senior officer’s daughter and Geet!When he saw Geet,her beauty was somewhat pricked him to have her.I denied,am tired of getting girls for him.It wasnt me who went to the mental hospital but my father.I had managed it with my colleague who was the doctor in that hospital.No one knew except we two that one who’s staying is my father but for this world i was taking the treatment there.Then Angad came there to take the revenge on Maan,becoz it was me who manipulated Angad’s mind to save myself and my father.I was protecting my father and to protect myself i spoiled Maan’s name.This works made me so guilty,the friends which i loved beyond my life i only destroyed their life to save my father.I dont deserve ur friendship or forgiveness as it needs to ability to get that from u guys.Then my father saw Geet and was obsessed with her.I dont want to become the victim of my father so i started to revolt becoz i had seen innocence in Geet’s eyes.Her pure,good and innocent soul had made me smitten!”Karan looked up straight with guilt and said,”Am in love with her Maan!”Maan’s jaw tighten and Karan immediately said,”Am sorry Maan,but for the first time,she was the one who melted my heart…my stone heart with her simplicity!Yes i had an eye on her!But my father wanted her for himself which always made me anger.At last his stubbornness won and i brought her to my house to hypnotise her as my father in closed watch on me.He knew that am in love with her.He dint want his prey to be manipulated.He forced me to hypnotise her and when it was going on may be god was favourable to her that she was saved.But my father started to blame me.He tried to go back when we both escaped from that place.Soldiers were swarming there and i dont want to lose my father.But it was too much,i had become uncontrollable.I was angry on myself for setting Geet’s life in danger.I had got to know that she was pregnant from Veer.I was jealous of u Maan for a mere moment as she had an immense love towards u.She loved u crazily and in sub-consious state also she was taking ur name only Maan which made me feel jealous but i dont want her to be dirty eyes by my father so i killed him myself by giving him poison.I injected it to his blood stream when we were in forest.I know i wont get any forgiveness from u guys and neither i want that too.But i wanted to tell the whole truth,i wanted to pour my heart Maan,Angad!Am sorry,becoz of me u both suffered a lot!”Maan and Angad held his both hand where their eyes were moist and seeing that Karan’s heart throbbed madder and he heaved heavily to catch the breath.Maan and Angad was shocked to see Karan twitching madly.

Veer saw this and ran to get doctor when Karan held Maan’s hands and pulled him towards him.Maan came immediately near him when he pulled him towards his mouth and whispered huskily in difficulty,”Stay away from Sasha,Maan!”Maan was shocked and confused and looked his eyes with question.How do he know my head architect Sasha?What is he hinting me?”When he was abt to open his mouth to ask those question then he saw Karan’s eyes which wasnt moving which saw ceiling blankly.Maan shook him,”Karan!Karan!”On that time doctor came declared that Karan is dead.It was Veer who burst into tears silently when both Maan and Angad held him by collpasing.Both Angad and Maan hugged Veer from each sides and murmured soothing words.But Maan was left out with so many questions.

Maan comes to the present world still stroking Geet’s back.He had a million question inside his mind but also felt pity hearing Karan’s state.His eyes welled up and tears silently poured down from his eyes which was fell over on Geet’s face for which she got up to get her love crying.Geet moaned,”Maan!”Maan looked up and her eyes said what is it when he smashed his lips on hers and soon he loved her gently trying to lessen his pain and she surrendered herself understanding his turmoil.

Precap-He slowly walked towards her staring at her chocolate brown eyes and bend down to touch her feet.She saw him trying to remember who he’s when she felt his palm on her feet.She felt a current down her spine and felt an deep warmth spread over her body.She saw him intently and was shocked to get he was Maan.She never thought that she would ever meet her son Maan Singh Khurana.Tears welled up inside her chocolate brown eyes which was the exact like Maan and it poured down to get a palm lapping it up.Geet came to her and held her shoulder and said,”Bua,he’s ur son,Maan Singh Khurana!”

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Geet was puzzled seeing his calmness and asked shockingly,”Maan,what r u saying,Veerji is not seen here and his home is in this state and then even Naina bhabhi is also not seen and u r acting so normally!”Maan said softly,”Jaan,no need to get worried.Veer is in army and he will have lots of enemy and dont worry may be this will be his plan of trying to be in undercover.So dont worry,lets go from here before someone sees us!”Geet was puzzled seeing him acting so normally.Geet dint move from there when Maan lifted her in his arms and immediately ran outside when Veer’s house exploded catching fire.Maaneet were shocked seeing the home blazing in fire.Immediately Geet fainted.Somewhere in an distance some one was seeing Maan cursing under breath for flopping their plan.

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PART 62

Maan immediately took Geet to the hospital.Doc checked her and warned Maan to give any stress to her.He cursed himself for taking Geet to Veer’s house and made her reach KM.He knew something was wrong,on that time two men stood facing each other.One was holding gun near other man’s forehead and that was Veer.Karan saw him smirking and his gun but he only smirked at Veer.Karan spoke carelessly,”Veer,do u want to kill me then do!But dont forget that Naina is in my custody!”Veer was shocked and immediately he dialled to his house.He dint get any reply instead he got an answer from the mobile that the phone is not reachable.Karan saw his expression and smirked and spoke,”Veer,no use of trying the phone.In fact ur number wont give any answer as it has been blown up!”Veer said with panic,”Blown up?”Karan said immediately seeing his panic,”Dont worry,Naina is alright and safe!But someone will be trapped in ur house for the trap has been built up.Veer asked,”Angad?”Karan said smirking,”Angad is in my captive only,so how come he goes there?”Veer’s eyes widened in shocked,”Maan!”Before Karan even answer positive Veer held his collar and snarled,”What happened to Maan?What did u do with him?Answer me!”

Karan dint answer and smiled victoriously and Veer snarled once again,”Karan!”Karan thought sometime and spoke,”Now Veer,why dont u understand?I want Geet and if i want her then i need to get her.But it cant be done till Maan’s presence,so he needs to free my pathway!So…….!Veer continued with the snarl,”So…u killed him!How can u Karan?U made Geet alone when she’s in crucial stage.She’s pregnant Karan and u made her baby orphan before it come from her mother’s womb?U r insane,u r cruel!Am not gonna leave u!”And immediately he started squeezing Karan’s neck which made him cough for air.Karan said in difficulty,”Veer,if u kill me then ur children lose their mother!”That’s it Veer left his neck with wide eyes.

Karan only smirked seeing his state and said,”Veer,u have no way to go.Either bring Geet to me or get ready to loose Naina and as a matter of fact,i have unfinished business with ur wife!”Veer was caught in the situation and was abt to shout when Karan assured,”Dont worry am not gonna touch her.She has loosen her charm after becoming the mother of ur two children.”Veer glared at him but he smirked and said,”Now go and bring Geet to me!”Veer said angrily,”What makes u think that i will bring Geet?”Karan smirked,”Veer,u love Naina so much and am sure u r not gonna see her like that!Go Veer,or else this time am gonna kill Naina!

Veer was shocked and his reluctance made him totally weak.Karan walked like a storm and Veer stood dipping his head in guilt.In on side,his beloved wife and in one side his beloved sister who trust him more than herself.He closed his eyes and on that time his mobile rang make him come from his chain of thoughts.He answered the phone call to get his senior officer.His heart beat frantically and he spoke everything which went on there.His senior officer decided to help him and sought a plan to capture Karan red handed.He tried to reach Maan thinking for a moment that he’s alive but he cudnt and even Geet was also not reachable.

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Veer entered KM like zombie and saw Geet sitting knitting a small pink sweater for baby.The position of her only made him so weak.He cant able to resist his pain.His heart bled seeing her happily knitting sweater.He for once cant able to stand as his knees got weakened and his eyes went moist.He immediately leaned on the nearby wall and saw towards Geet.Tears poured down silently from his black eyes.He felt he’s gonna break her trust by taking her to Karan.He dint speak just admired his god sister who was busy knitting sweater happily.His throat went dry and tears dint stop glistening from his round eyes.He held his left chest where heart lies and felt an immense pain.He never felt this pain in his course of life…when he disappointed his wife by not taking her for outing or not fulfilling her desires.But this pain,may be he was bound to feel this pain as he’s abt to put an innocent soul in danger.Not one soul but another which was cocooned in her womb.He thought after this sin he’s gonna go straight to hell when he dies.He was seeing his god sister painfully when someone came from behind.He immediately wiped his tears and saw it was Nakul.

Nakul asked,”Veer baba,why r u standing here?”On that time Geet looked up hearing the name Veer.Geet asked curiously,”Kaka,with whom r u talking?”Veer had stood behind the pillar that she cant see his face or body too.Veer walked towards her for which Geet was shocked and immediately ran towards him throwing her kroshaw.She immediately launched herself on him and hugged him tighter.Veer was shocked seeing her like this when she spoke continuously,”Veerji,where were u?We thought u were kidnapped!Ur house was messy and and Naina bhabhi….!Where is she,Veerji?And then when we came outside on that time the house too exploded.If we were there then we three would become history!Where were u veerji and Naina bhabhi?”Veer dint understand what happened and asked,”Hold on Geet,what r u saying?”

Geet took a deep breath and explained what happened this morning.After hearing this his heart felt more lighter and thought,”Maan is ok!Thank god!”Then asked,”But where is Maan?”Geet pouted,”He went to Mumbai for some meeting,it was important so he went and even he said seeing the messy house that u r in army and to save urself from ur enemy,u always do that…and even ur house got blasted due to that,did u do that and where’s Naina bhabhi?”Veer now understood and took a deep calming breath feeling happy that Maan is alive.Geet saw him intently and gave a confused look and asked,”What happened Veerji,everything is alright?”Veer immediately came to present world and spoke,”Yeah,everything is alright!”Geet gave a full dimple smile and said,”Come one veerji,lets have lunch!”Veer denied her,”No Geet,i need to go!I will talk to u later!”Geet felt odd seeing them both thinking that both r hiding something from her.Becoz whoever heard the fact that their house gone blown up then they would panic but both were acting so normally and even she dint get any information abt Naina too.

Veer came outside and called Nakul.He instructed Nakul to keep an eye on Geet and he left the KM.On that time a man was following Veer who informed Karan that he cant do the work which was given.Next Karan sought a plan and dialled KM.When a melodious sweety voice came from that side on that time his expressions changed.He licked his dry lips and moaned softly.That side Geet asked,”Who’s this?”Karan immediately changed his voice and talked as Bahadur,Maan’s driver and said,”Madamji,Maan sir ko accident ho gaya hai!Aap jaldi aayiyega!”Geet was shocked hearing it and asked in panic,”Where?”Bahadur urf Karan said the place and cut the call.

Meanwhile Maan before he sit inside the flight he dialled Geet to get last minute kiss as he will be far away from her for one day(Uff am thinking he cant leave his sweety for one day)But Geet dint take the phone and Maan got panic.He knew that it wasnt a good sign from morning something odd was happening.He dialled her once again but she dint take and immediately he dialled Nakul.Nakul answered the call and was shocked to hear Maan’s voice.Nakul said,”Maan baba,are u alright,we got ur accident news!”Maan said,”What?But am in airport waiting for my flight.Who said that information and where is Geet?”Nakul said everything abt the call and Maan was angry and he immediately called Bahadur and took class of him.But Bahadur was innocent and he pleaded that he dint say anything to madam.

Now Maan got panic and worried for Geet.He cancelled the meeting and once again tried to Veer.Veer immediately received and both were shocked to hear Geet missing.Veer immediately try to trace her mobile phone and Maan started searching everywhere.Here Geet came to the place and saw around her.It was haunted road and she was scared seeing the surroundings.Her heart beated rapidly and she saw someone lying upside down ahead.Geet was shocked and screamed,”Maan!”She thought him as Maan and immediately collapsed in front of his body when she felt someone behind her.She looked up to see the person but not anymore as her eyes went dark and she fell on the ground.

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A man wore and army uniform and walked past some soldiers and said,”Remember one thing,Geet need to be rescued and be soft with her as she’s not in condition to resist rough behaviour.The soldiers nodded and sat inside the truck.That officer sat in front and said to driver to start the truck.Soldiers were abt 4-5 men who were armed with revolver.

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Here in the abandoned castle,someone was screaming from the cellar of the castle.I want her Karan!I cant control it!On that time Naina shouted from another cellar,”Karan u cant conquer her!Leave her!”Meanwhile Karan was hypnotising Geet.He dint do anything while his eyes widened and he said,”Take off ur clothes Geet!”Geet took off her duppatta and unzipped her kurti only.His eyes were widened and he was eager to see her naked beauty which he was dreaming from months when his eyes fell on her mangalsutra.It flashed to the light of sun which made him to close to his eyes which made the trance to break.Geet blinked immediately and turned this side and that side when she saw where she’s.In nano second she got to know flinching Karan closing his eyes while she saw her diamond beads of the pendent of her mangalsutra which had broke his trance and he was flinching and then she got to know that she was in trance till now but not anymore and she immediately went into trance(pretending)Karan controlled his eyes and rubbed it and immediately opened his eyes and felt relieved when he saw Geet still seeing blankly.Karan saw her mangalsutra and thought it may have create problem and came forward to take it off.His hands came towards her mangalsutra which was dangling on her soft curves and touched it.On that time Geet came from the trance and the anger went into peak and immediately she held his hand gritting her teeth and bit his all fingers.

Karan screamed in pain and he was abt to slap on that time he felt a truck horn and it standing in front of the castle.He got panic while he heard a deep moan of delight from the cellar,”Where’s she?Where’s Geet Karan?”Karan saw around him and felt he has been trapped and immediately went towards the cellar.He dragged a man of abt 50s who was writhing trying to go towards Geet.Karan immediately dragged him to the back door and ran inside the jungle.Meanwhile Naina saw her with shock as she had completely threw her hypnotism power.She hugged her and danced with joy.

Geet dint knew what was happening around her but when she felt Naina’s warmth on that time her face wrinkled and throat suppressed the sobs of her.But Naina got wind of it and she said,”Calm down!Nothing happened!”The soldiers entered the castle and saluted Naina and asked abt Karan.Naina spoke that he ran away towards the forest.Soldiers ran behind him and Veer’s senior officer stood seeing his daughter’s body.Geet immediately hid her face inside Naina’s neck when Maan and Veer arrived.When Geet saw Maan on that time she hoisted herself on him kissing all over his face and shouted,”Are u alright?”Maan chuckled seeing her panic and said stroking her lips from his long fingers,”Never better!”Geet cutely hid her face and sobbed and he stroked her hairs and murmured soothing words.Veer hugged Naina and gave one passionate kiss to her lips.Naina reciprocated it and snaked his neck.When they broke apart on that time Veer’s senior officer was sobbing his daughter’s corpse.

Veer went to console him but he ordered him to take his family and friend from there.Veer knew that his senior officer can handle everything and said to Maan,”Maan u take Naina and Geet to our hideout.I will come back later!”Maan nodded and both Maaneet walked outside the castle.But Naina hugged Veer tightly and kissed his forehead and said,”Be careful!”Veer nodded and french kissed her before leaving towards the forest.Both Maaneet came to their hideout tree house.Geet was totally in shock seeing the turn of events on that day and Maan distracted her by the passionate love making after Naina retired to sleep.

He remembered all this incident glancing at an mango tree which was half-grown.Geet stirred and moaned as he was still inside her.He saw her uncomfortableness and immediately came outside making her wince slightly and made her sleep beside him tugging herself on his shoulder.She cutely cuddled up and her lips brushed to his left chest which made him groan softly.He chuckled seeing his innocent wify but got serious seeing her scared to death when she stood inside that mansion.Maan knew Veer gonna capture Karan and he wanted to give a piece of mind to not to eye his wify in future.He was boiling in anger when he got to know that she was captured by Karan from her car’s GPS system

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Karan glared at him while Veer only smiled at him.Veer was so hurted and he spoke,”Do u know Karan,i thought u will become an gentleman after i made u the member of my gang where there was only love and friendship.I thought u will give us the very same love and friendship which we gave u!But,u…why u went to that way Karan?Was our love and friendship dint liked by u?Why is it Karan that i got failed trying to make u gentleman?Why i failed in that?”Karan turned that side and his words were melting him.Veer continued,”Do u know in what state u were found by me?I saw my image in your eyes!I saw my past in ur eyes on that time!I thought i can make u gentleman just like me…i wanted to save ur life Karan!But why u went to that side?Why u chose darkness?Why u dint come back to light after getting tired of that darkness?When i forcefully threw the light on u then why u chose the darkness?”

Karan was speechless,he dint had any answers to Veer’s questions.Veer turned and saw him intently.Karan was in dilemma and his face was showing that when Veer slowly took his gun and kept it on Karan’s forehead.Karan turned and saw Veer’s smirking face who had a victorious smirk.

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Part 61

Khurana Mansion,

After some hours or so,Maan got up feeling restless and felt a soft body against him.He looked at Geet who was sleeping on him peacefully.There was a cute smile playing on her swollen lips.He dint understand what type of restlessness is this as he’s near his love and she’s sleeping in his embrace.Seems his restlessness was ringing his sixth sense bell abt something.But he cudnt understand that what is that and he snuggled more to her and closed his eyes.

Next morning Geet came from the washroom to see her love sleeping peacefully.She admired him as he had slept on his stomach and his hands were around his pillow and was wrapped in the sheet from his bu**.She felt a shiver down her spine seeing the sight.She felt aroused seeing him sleeping fully naked peacefully.His back was full of her nail scratches which made her eyes moist.She came near the bed and slowly slipped inside the blanket and slept on him pressing her soft curves.She was wearing his shirt only.He groaned feeling her soft body and spoke sleepily,”Hmm,Geet!”Geet spoke sweetly,”Good morning jaanu(honey)!”Maan brought her hand which was stroking his torso and kissed her knuckles and said,”Good morning Mishti(sweety)!”

Maan relaxed completely feeling her soft body on him and asked,”Jaan..u r sleeping in odd posture.This is not good for baby!”Geet said cutely,”Baby also needs its papa,so am sleeping like this!Let baby feel its papa!”Maan smiled nodding dismissively while she kissed his back gently.He groaned,”Seems u r not making our baby feel its papa but inviting romance in the air!Jaan dont do it,I will hv difficulty in control when u will be in this mood!”Geet said cutely,”Baby also needs its papa so am making it feel his papa and dont u dare oppose it!”Maan chuckled,”Jaan am not opposing but still this is not good for baby!U r seriously sleeping in odd posture!”Geet dint spoke but bit his back harshly.He groaned and asked angrily,”What r u doing?”Geet dint reply and started kissing his back softly.Maan groaned,”Jaan!”She dint listen to him and kissed his back curves and accidentally pressed her flat tummy to his bare back which made her wince in slight pain.Maan immediately sensed this as he had felt her flat tummy rigid when it came into contact and screamed,”Jaan!”She immediately slipped beside him holding her flat tummy and he said,”Am gonna call Naina!”

But Geet stopped him still holding his back and said,”No am ok!”Maan touched her flat tummy and kissed it several times and snarled at once,”Why dont u understand my words and follow it?What if u had pressed ur tummy more heavily?Arent u happy becoming mother?I was telling u from first that u r sleeping in odd posture but u dint understand me!”Geet cried,”Am sorry!”Maan shouted angrily,”Shut up!Just shut up Geet!In future u r not gonna sleep in this posture!Do u understand!”Geet nodded meekly still crying and he declared,”We are going to see Naina!”Geet was abt to protest but his one glare made her mouth shut.

Both Maaneet entered Veer’s house,but……..

The house was in messy state as if someone has been kidnapped the inhabitants of the house and took away.Geet was shocked to see the house like that and asked scared,”Maan,what happened here?”Maan himself was shocked and thought,”So that restlessness was for Veer and Naina and i dint understand it!”He eagerly ran around to get some clue when he got a golden locket there.It was the very same locket which he had presented Karan on his 21st birthday.Maan squeezed the locket in his fist and saw around to get torn dress of Naina.Maan panicked,”Did he…..?”His throat went dry seeing the messy state and he turned to see Geet seeing the place in fear.She asked him meekly,”Maan,What happened to the place and where is Naina?”Maan closed his eyes and opened it being calm and spoke gently to her,”Jaan,dont worry i will find her.Till then u stay in KM only.I will phone up our family doctor.She comes and examines u in KM!Let’s go jaan!”

Geet was puzzled seeing his calmness and asked shockingly,”Maan,what r u saying,Veerji is not seen here and his home is in this state and then even Naina bhabhi is also not seen and u r acting so normally!”Maan said softly,”Jaan,no need to get worried.Veer is in army and he will have lots of enemy and dont worry may be this will be his plan of trying to be in undercover.So dont worry,lets go from here before someone sees us!”Geet was puzzled seeing him acting so normally.Geet dint move from there when Maan lifted her in his arms and immediately ran outside when Veer’s house exploded catching fire.Maaneet were shocked seeing the home blazing in fire.Immediately Geet fainted.Somewhere in an distance some one was seeing Maan cursing under breath for flopping their plan.

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