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Major said,”Who said that its Geet’s turn now its Sahana’s turn then Veer’s turn and then Maan’s turn and then lastly Geet’s turn.”

Sasha cried,”I joined hands with you so that i can get Maan.If you murder him then how can i get him?”

Major said,”I dont leave people remaining to revenge on me.After your purpose you will also freed from this world.”

Sasha was shocked hearing this but it was too late.He pushed her from him and locked her in dungeons so that she dont mess the plans.



It was the silence which was lingering everywhere.Some were silence before storm while some were silence after storm.Some people die and live once again while some people will be living still they were dead people to the world.Venomous Desires were inside man’s minds were once again coming in front of the world.For one man’s venomous desires whole world was suffering.From Maan to Geet…from Sahana to Samarth…from Sasha to Major Shatru.

Major Shatru was feeling venomous desires while Maaneet and their family were suffering.Pammi was having the venomous desire of having Geet’s baby to her daughter but she met the brutal end.Everyone suffered because of these venomous desires and everyone repented their mistake.But one man is out there lingering half mad and half well to get the taste of pain…the brutal pain for which he was destined who himself prepared to taste it unknowingly.Revenge is a sweet  and slow poison which he’s tasting from past 30 years.The great Major Shatru was about to strike his plan to capture the whole Khurana clan.One strike and Khurana clan will be checkmated.

Maan sat in Singhania study and breathed heavily.He was surrounded by his mother,Veer and Sanjay.He wanted to kill Major Shatru that instense when he heard about the real story.How Major Shatru destroyed his life,his mother’s life.Sanjay was keeping his hand on his head and was sitting on the chair hearing the whole story.Maan wanted to revenge on Major but someone is there who want to take care of that Major.

Maan snarled,”Veer,let me go!I want to kill that Major who destroyed my life completely!”

Veer sat in front of him and looked straight in his eyes and asked calmly,”Don’t you have any brains Maan!Everytime you think of killing people!”

Maan glared at him while he continued,”Don’t you have any responsibility in your life that you are running helter skelter thinking of revenging people!”

Maan said angrily,”You are a coward man Veer!If someone who would be in my place asking for parents love and then he knows that his parents separated because of some Major who lusted my mother and he destroyed my mother completely then you would never say these words!”

Veer shouted glaring at him,”Yes i am a coward man because am struck with my responsibility.You said that i would destroy that man if i was in your place but before that i would secure my wife and children and then i would revenge on that person.But right now am there to do your work then you don’t need to bother!”

Maan was shocked and snapped.”I dont want to shoot him from your shoulder!”

Veer said,”This is not some ordinary shoulder…this law’s shoulder which is giving the permission to kill that man without any enquiry or hearing or any other law formalities in which he can escape with small loopholes!”Maan said,”But…!”Sahana said,”Veer is right Maan!I can’t do anything as am ordinary citizen and you can’t do anything too!It’s Veer only who can protect us!I need to write a letter seeking military protection from Major Shatru!”Maan said immediately,”But we don’t have any proofs to prove him guilty!”Veer said immediately,”We have!Many!”


Khurana mansion 6pm

Geet woke with a start and cursed Maan for making her sleep so late.She walked slowly towards the kitchen holding her large belly and pouting to herself.She crossed the dining hall and saw a beautiful Rose bouquet.She wondered who sent that and walked towards it.

She called the servants,”Manoj,Vinod come here!”

Manoj said politely,”Yes madam!”

Geet asked,”Who sent this bouquet?”

Manoj answered,”I dont know madam.It was kept outside the door!”

Geet said,”Is it?”

She looked towards it and saw a letter and took it.She sent the servant and opened the letter.Meanwhile Maan collapsed feeling weirdly.He felt something wrong going to happen.Here Geet read the letter.

The letter said,”Wanna know who murdered Pammi?Meet me at 12pm today near your house gate!”

There was no name or sign and she was shocked and thought,”Murder!But Maan said her death was a suicide!”

She saw the letter back to front and she dint get anything.Tears poured down from her almond eyes and she ran to her room holding the letter.

She dialled to Maan while Maan asked holding his heart,”Is he going to harm Geet in his revenge game?”

Before Veer answer him he got Geet’s call and he answered,”Yes jaan!”


Geet asked,”Maan,tell me the truth!Was chachiji murdered or she committed suicide!”

Maan stammered and she caught his lies and cried,”Why dint you tell me?What would i answer Sameera di when she asks that why i dint take any care?”

Maan said sternly,”Geet,you are taking tension unnecessarily!No one gonna blame you jaan!”

Geet said,”But…!”

Maan said sternly,”Listen to me….you dont think too much about it.Am coming home!”

He disconnected the phone and said to Veer,”Let’s go to KM!We’re needed there rather than here!”

When they reached home then Geet shouted on them for behaving so secretive.But Maan explained her patiently and made her eat food.Then he tried to make her drink Milk but she said that she dont want Milk today instead she want Ice cream.Maan ran to bring her favourite ice cream while 12pm came very soon.The coast was clear for Geet to go to the gate and she went meanwhile Major Shatru entered the KM…


Major Shatru caught Geet and said,”I was waiting for you to taste this beauty!”He stroked her lips softly.Immediately she threw his hands from her.He was angry and twisted her hands.She screamed in pain while he turned her with him to see her face in the mirror.Shock etched in Major Shatru’s face…

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On that time in Singhania Mansion,Pammi felt restless feeling someone around her…keeping an eye on her.She knew that Sanjay has gone to Sahana and that made her angry.But now she was restless.On that time power went off.Pammi was scared and looked around her.Meanwhile she felt someone walking behind her.Luckily invertor was connected and it lit immediately and whole mansion got lit with light.On that time a man was standing behind her holding a sickle.Pammi sighed seeing the light but felt someone behind her.She turned and saw the face.She was shocked and the invertor light went off too as it got burst at once.

After few seconds,Pammi screamed!




Khurana mansion 8pm…..

Maan was feeding the stubborn childish Geet while somewhere in study Sanjay was getting to know about the past of his wife which was hidden from him past his married life.Sanjay sat in the state of shock after hearing the whole story of Pammi and was angry too because she was like this from her birth…stubborn,bossy and doing what she thinks as right but that will be wrong always.Sanjay looked at his god-sister Sahana who was concerned looking at him.Her chocolate brown eyes were worried and was warm too.Sanjay was angry but was concerned too thinking about his wife.Afterall Pammi was his wife,no matter what she does is wrong but he cant see her in trouble.

Sanjay asked to confirm the story,”Are you sure?”

Sahana  nodded.Sanjay gulped down his saliva and said,”Then i’ll join you guys.I’ll help you in this mission.

Sahana nodded no but looked towards Veer who was giving the look of interest.Veer wanted as many persons who can he trust and protect Geet and her baby.Veer approved Sanjay to help but they dint know that already tragedy happened in Sanjay’s house.Sanjay went back to his home and got his house in mess.He was shocked to see his messy house and Pammi to be nowhere.Sanjay was worried and alert too.He searched the whole house but he dint get her.He shouted her name but it echoed in the empty messy house.Finally he saw servant in injured state.He called the ambulance immediately and asked for Pammi.The servant pointed his finger towards the backyard and unconscious.Sanjay walked towards the backyard and felt some eerie silence.He opened the door of backyard and saw a merciless sight.There was Pammi hanged to death.Blood was oozing out from her neck but her tongue was outside the mouth.Sanjay cant able to see the sight so hid his face behind his both hands.

Nausea touched his body giving uncomfortable breathing.He started to cough feeling disgusted.Pity covered his heart and tears poured down from his deep 58 aged eyes.He immediately dialled Veer and screamed feeling the agony.

Sanjay said painfully,”Everything i have got lost Veer.He has murdered my Pammi!”

Veer was shocked hearing this and immediately drove towards Singhania mansion.When Veer entered then the sight made him so nauseating that he cant able to resist the sight and came outside.Sanjay sat crying silently afterall she was his life partner.Veer saw his state and try to console him but h was unsuccessful so he called Sahana foe help.Meanwhile Veer wanted to clear up the mess before police swarm the place.When Sahana got to know the message on that time both Maaneet were present and seeing her tension they got to know something’s wrong.When they got to know the news on that time they were in shock state.Geet was stubborn to go with them to see her Chachiji.

Geet asked crying,”Maan,i want to see my chachiji.One last time,i want to see her face.Please take me!”

Maan said strictly,”No jaan,i cant take u!U r pregnant and that environment isnt fit for u!”

Geet begged,”Maan!”

But Maan dint listen to her and made her drink a glass of Milk forcefully.Geet drank it and after sometime she slept inside his chest.

Maan sighed and gently lifted her and made her sleep on the bed and pecked her forehead and said,”Am sorry jaan.Its not good to u to see a dead body which is brutally murdered!”

Maan saw the dead body and was shocked while both Veer and Sahana was whispering something to themselves only.Maan was angry looking at them and dragged them both to a lone corner and asked,”Now you tell me what’s going on!I thought u guys will tell me urself but seeing the situation i dont think that anymore.I want every bit of the truth or else you see angry MSK in future!”Both winced hearing his words but spoke to him.


Meanwhile in the outskirts of the city,abandoned factory,a party was going on.A *** party was going on.A woman screamed out of pain and pleasure and immediately a man screamed out of pleasure calling her some bad names and enjoying the every bit of moment spending inside her.This was Major Shatru who was partying because he have only one woman remaining to kill and that woman is Sahana.

Major Shatru stuffed his hardness inside that random girl making her scream in pain and screamed,”I will not leave you Sahana.I will kill you!”

After numerous rounds where the girl started bleeding Major left her tied to a bed in chains and entered the bathroom.He saw Sasha entering and pulled her into his arms.Sasha smirked mischievously while he smacked her bu** strongly.Sasha screamed in pain while Major Shatru smirked.

Sasha said,”Now its Geet’s turn!”

Major said,”Who said that its Geet’s turn now its Sahana’s turn then Veer’s turn and then Maan’s turn and then lastly Geet’s turn.”

Sasha cried,”I joined hands with you so that i can get Maan.If you murder him then how can i get him?”

Major said,”I dont leave people remaining to revenge on me.After your purpose you will also freed from this world.”

Sasha was shocked hearing this but it was too late.He pushed her from him and locked her in dungeons so that she dont mess the plans.


Major Shatru entered Khurana Mansion to capture Geet as hostage to finish the revenge game and end the Khurana and Singhania family.




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Part 01

Hoshiarpur village border…


A scream which can make every man’s heart beat faster.A scream which can make a weak man die out of breath.A scream which can shake whole world.That scream came from that border.There was a house nearby who got alive hearing that scream.The head of the family held the torch and ran towards the scream to help.But whoever screamed dint need any help because that person was helping others.That man walked towards the commotion and saw someone drinking something and immediately he felt something fall down in front of him.That man saw the thing and was shocked and was scared.It was a human dead body which was blood less and skin were wrinkled and he was a mere skeleton.

That man said to himself,”Ye koi rakshas hai!Bhag yahan se nahin toh tu uske liye aahaar ban jaavoge”(This one is a demon!Run before you become food to that)

He ran back while behind there was a commotion and anklets sound came.He was curious,he wanted to know who did this so he hid behind a bush.He saw a woman walking towards the dead body and kicking it.He held his breath as he felt her around him.

She dragged the dead body and spoke with anger,”Dint i tell you to not to touch me!Do you think me that some helpless woman who can only scream for help?No,this is Geet Handa!Do you understand?This world dont know what i can do but i know!This Geet Handa knows what she can do!I came quietly helplessly with you to kill you guys.It was destined that you were gonna die in my hand only!”

Immediately there was a commotion and a man started running in hurt condition but Geet was very faster.

She caught him while he screamed afraid of her,”Don’t do anything to me please!”

Geet asked with triumph,”Why not i?Why i cant do anything to you?You were the one who sold me to that Zamindar!Why cant i do anything to u?”

That man folded his hands and said meekly,”Am sorry,i will not repeat this once again!”

Geet laughed out loud.Her face now reflected towards the moon light which had only anger.She had almond eyes with big brown hazel eyes which had only anger and smirk.Her long white nose was lean and beautiful.Her soft pink lips complemented the complexion she’s having.But those lips were blood stained and she was licking it as if the blood is so delicious.

That man said sorry once again but Geet dint leave him and said,”Today a big yagna gonna start and you are the first sacrifice!”

And she ate him and drank his blood.That man died and Geet laughed out loud walking forward.The man who was hiding and seeing all this saw her Kali avatar with so many hands holding weapons.That man fainted there only.


Here near Patiala,Maan felt something odd and he closed his eyes sitting there only.He saw what happened and Geet’s anger avatar.Maan was shocked seeing her avatar while his favourite god sat in front of him.

Maan thought,”Amma,what i saw is true or not!”

Chamundamma answered,”Yes son,what you saw is truth only.Geet because of her power she’s beautiful and avatar of me.Am alive in her that’s why she’s always angry!You need to control her Maan and this work can only done by you.Will you help my daughter Maan?”

Maan thought,”Ofcourse amma,your wish is my command!”

He opened his eyes and started driving towards the village.


A man covered with blood ran inside a mansion calling,”Bauji!”

Bauji stood in front of his royal painter holding his sword with ego and smirk.His royal painter was painting his portrait.

Bauji moved his fingers towards the man and said to come to him.That man came and whispered something in his ears for he got angry.

Bauji dint wanted this to happen and snarled,”Call Pammi now!”

Bauji saw Pammi scared and tortured her.

He asked,”Speak up,why you cheated me?I said that she’ll dance in front of me first and then she will dance in front of that god.But she danced in front of the god to help villagers.Now she’s god in front of them.She got the power from that worship and became self-dependent.When i got to know that she’s having the power which can make me rule this world then she ran away.Are you behind this or not?”

Pammi spoke with fear,”What i can do Vikram bauji?The power has made her invincible,irresistible.”

Vikram saw her for sometime and said,”I believe you are saying truth but now myself gonna hunt her down.I like hunting these types who resist me.It will be worth when she climbs my bed for further service.”

Vikram drove towards the Handa mansion which was seen by a man who was so loyal to Vikram’s parents.He tried to stop Vikram by going wrong way doing wrong deeds but he failed in that.So he wanted to save Vikram’s life as he knew that Geet has turned weird.Whole village was speaking that she wasn’t the usual Geet Handa who was enjoying the life without any worry.


Handa Mansion….

Darkness crept everywhere giving an haunted silence.There was no one in the mansion except one who was breathing so hardly.Wide brown eyes were looking towards the opened door waiting for someone while she was sitting on fire in the mid air.


Here Maan reached Hoshiarpur border and met the man who saw the horrible incident of Geet.He was unconscious and Maan tend him.Maan healed him as he was so scared and made him forget Geet’s incident after getting all the information from him.After few minutes of drive Maan reached Handa mansion and saw that full mansion was in darkness.He walked inside and lit the light.

Then Geet spoke from behind,”Who the hell are you and who gave you permission to lit this mansion?”

Maan turned slowly and saw towards Geet.Geet was mesmerised seeing his handsome features.His deep chocolate eyes,his long white nose and M shaped pink lips and his masculine handsome features made her speechless.Her anger had vanished into thin air seeing his sight.

Geet thought,”Wow!”

Maan spoke softly,”Its evening now and this time this mansion need to be lit with lights.Where’s oil?Today is Friday and if u dont light the oil lamps then Goddess Lakshmi will go from your house!”

Geet asked softly still mesmerised,”Who are you?”

Maan answered,”Am your new tenant,i have heard that there’s a room empty here and i can give you reasonable amount.Can you give me that room for rent?”

Geet who was in trance nodded vigorously.

Maan smiled and said,”Good!I want to see my room but before that lets lit the lamp!Will you show me your washroom?”

Geet nodded and showed as she was still captivated by his handsome features.Maan washed his hands and feet and sprinkled some water on his head and said the mantra to make him pure.Then he entered the pooja room and was about to light the lamp when he saw Geet entering and stopped her.

Maan said,”Geet,stop right there!”Geet was shocked that he knows her name and her temper raised.Before she argue him and kill him he spoke faster,”Go and wash urself and then worship the god.”

Geet looked herself as she was sitting in the very same blood stained dress and her mouth and face was full of blood spots.Geet felt yucky seeing her state and ran inside her washroom to bath.After her bath she wore pure white silk sari and entered the pooja room.Maan was shocked seeing her like that and a smile crept on his beautifully carved lips.Geet too smiled and both lit the whole mansion and chanted the mantra to get rid of the evil.

Precap-Maan said with anger,”Geet is my life partner!”Geet saw Maan with welled up eyes.Joy danced in those hazel almond eyes.

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Darkness crept everywhere giving an eerie silence.On that time anklets sound came while some human figures were crouching to hide from something.One of the men saw a human figure and indicated his head.That man took his revolver and shot the human figure.A scream came and made a man get up from deep sleep.He was naked and was so masculine Deep scratches complemented his finely carved masculine body.His deep chocolate eyes searched for someone.He was so handsome with deep chocolate eyes which hypnotize anyone who see him.His M shaped lips were pink color and were swollen.His dark silky hairs were messy.He washed his face in the nearby pot full of water.

He called,”Jhanvi”

There was no trace of Jhanvi.So he wore his clothes and came outside in search of her.Meanwhile the pack of men who shot the person came forward to get to know that the person who they shot is alive or not.But on that time they felt something odd and turned to see a big beefy man holding a long gun coming towards them.They ran immediately from there seeing him.

Meanwhile the handsome man searched for Jhanvi.After walking for few minutes his bare foot felt something wet on the floor.He saw towards it and smelt.It was the smell of blood and he held his torch to it.He felt something odd as if his heart has been squeezed and his restlessness said that Jhanvi was in trouble.He dint know exactly what happened so he was trying to guess.He walked further and saw a small temple.The blood stains led him towards that temple.He entered it and was shocked.There lied Jhanvi in blood pool.

He was shocked and pained to see her state and ran to her.

He took her in his arms and called her with agitation,”Jhanvi!”

He thought that she’s no more.

He screamed in agitation,”Jhanvi!”

That girl’s small eyes opened slowly and he saw her bright brown eyes which captivated him.A small smile crept in those small swollen lips.

She spoke meekly,”Maan!”

Maan’s eyes welled up and his tears poured down.

Jhanvi spoke meekly,”I was praying to god that to keep me alive till your sleep is over!”

Maan said painfully,”Jhanvi!”He tried to lift her in his arms but she stopped him.

She said meekly,”Listen to me Maan,i wanted to tell you my story but i was scared that you will accept that or not!”

Maan said confidently,”Jhanvi,anything you say i will accept it without questions but right now u need medical att….!”Before he complete his sentence Jhanvi kept her finger on his beautiful lips.

She said meekly,”Listen to me first Maan,i dont have enough time.I want to make you aware of some things.But before that u promise me that whatever i say you will accept it without any questions!”

Maan said,”Ok!”and kept his palm on her palm.

Jhanvi said,”You have to marry Geet!”

Maan was angry now and shouted,”What?What are you talking about?”

Jhanvi said,”Please Maan,dont deny it and even its the order of Chamundamma!”

Maan dint say anything and closed his eyes and started to heal her.But he cant able to chant the mantra as Chamundamma has sat on his tongue.

Maan attempted several times but he cant able to chant that mantra and at once Jhanvi said,”U cant do that because my time has come.Am in the zone of Paramatma!”

She showed her hand towards the sky and said,”Look,my favourite gods Lord Mahadeva and Mother Parvati is standing in front of me smiling…waiting for me to go to them.They both have done so many things for me.My horoscope was very poor but i had an boon.The power to make any god to come towards me.They gave everything to me though i was poor in my horoscope.My horoscope said that due to previous birth’s works i never was going to happy.But my devotion made me impress Lord Shiva and Mother Parvati.Today am going to them as am getting mukti from you.But i want you to marry Geet!”

Before Maan speak further she cut him and started her story.”Maan,Geet is my twin sister who born in Swati nakshatra.You are Uttarashada nakshatra and your ganas and her ganas got matched perfectly but i came between you two.I wanted you and i got you but i knew that after getting you,my death is fixed because,i had this much time only.I made her bad in your eyes.I made her characterless in your eyes and am reaping the prize.But am not worried because am going to my place but please you marry Geet.You save her from the evils and save her from all kinds of problems.Because she’s the key to this world to kill the big evil which gonna come in future!Will u marry her and save her?”

Maan nodded while Jhanvi smiled and looked upwards as her eye lid dint move.Maan hugged her tightly and after that he lit her body to ashes and walked towards Jhanvi’s home where now Geet is about to be given to that village’s zamindar.

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Ana walked inside her portland home.

When she stepped inside the living room then a walking stick blocked her way and spoke harshly,”You are late Ana!”

Ana didn’t speak and walked further crossing the walking stick.

“****,*****,*****!”Said her father Raymond Steele.

Ana snarled,”Shut up!”

Ray snarled,”Am your father Ana,give respect to me!”

Ana asked,”Have u behaved respectable?”

Ray glared at her while she enterd her room and wiped her tears which were spilling hearing her step-father’s bad words.Ana had her shower and went to the kitchen to prepare something as she knew that whatever prepared for dinner has been polished by the parasites who are living in her house.Ana kept the do-it fast pasta inside the microwave oven and sighed sitting on the chair waiting for its ping of cooked indication.On that time a delicious Beef casserole with lots of cheese and pasta salad plate was placed in front of her.Ana groaned smelling it and dug in.On that time a chuckle came and she looked up to get her mother Carla Steele.Carla was a soft woman who was totally abused by her first husband who was an billionnaire.She got divorced from him with high alimoney which was spent by Raymond Steele in pokers and Casinos.She landed with two children-2 girls from her first marriage and 3 children-2 boys and one girl from her second marriage.Moreover Ray’s parents and sister are also staying with them.It was totally mess up and she was the sole earner of the family.

Carla stroked her hairs and pecked her forehead and spoke,”Why so late honey?”

Ana replied,”I missed my bus mom because i was working late today in office!”

Carla saw her agitation and asked,”You want to say something honey!”

Ana said,”No!”And gave her best fake smile.Carla didn’t understand her agitation and leave her.

Next Morning,

As usual,Ana got ready for office and went and once again she was harassed by her boss Jack Hyde and she once wiggled out of it and once again got late for the last bus and sat in the bus stop getting so much tired of her life.Tears threatened to come when she felt someone standing near her.She looked up and saw a man who was smiling at her.Before she speak he asked,”You want a lift Miss Steele!”

Ana exclaimed,”Mr.Grey,what are u doing here?”

Christian said,”This is my usual route to reach Portland Miss Steele!What happened,you missed your bus today?”

Ana said sadly,”Yes sir!”

Christian said,”Call me Christian!If u dont have any objection then i will drop you home!”

Ana was grateful because she was once again getting calls from her step-father and was calling her bad words.Ana nodded and they both entered the car.

Christian said,”Taylor,Portland please.You tell him the address when he reach Portland!”

Ana nodded while Taylor pulled on the car.The journey home was not that much comfortable as a hot hunk guy picked her up.She was staring at his sensual mouth only whole the journey and Christian was engrossed with the file.She frowned being ignored but his posture made her so sexy.Grey eyes moving on the file paper as if kissing it thorougly from his eyes.His concentration made her retreat back.She wanted to speak to him get to know him but his posture was giving her indication to steer clear of him.But surging electricity which was sparkling between them made them aware that how much they both are desperate.Taylor who was glancing their demeanors from the glass thought that they made for each other perfectly.The way Christian engrossed in the work but glancing her from his corner of his eyes and Ana who glanced him frowning pouting her lips made the sight remarkable.


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Maan nodded no to her and walked outside.Everyone followed her and he made her sit in front of the dining table.Smell of her favourite dishes made Geet forget the incident and took the spoon of the spicy dal which Pammi had prepared.Pammi chuckled looking at Geet who was a child herself looking at those delicious dishes. 



Both Maaneet enjoyed their stay in Pammi’s house and went away.Geet was happy to get her maayka back but not Maan.Maan was agitated because of the convo which he heard between Pammi and Sanjay.

Few Hours Back——->

Pammi to Sanjay,”How many times do i have to tell u to repair that chandelier?U have become so lazy these days Sanjay!”

Sanjay answered,”But i had repaired it yesterday only!”

Pammi came near him and examined his iris of his eyes and spoke,”Then i think u cant see nowadays.Let’s go to the Eye doctor!”

Sanjay said irritably,”Stop taunting me Pammi,am still 58!”

Pammi asked,”Then how come that chandelier fell down?U dint put the bolts correctly that’s why it fell down.Am fortunate that i dint go to the store room to take things.Or else i would have injured.Stop covering up ur mistakes becoz of ur carelessness!”

Pammi exited the room angrily but someone was listening to their conversation and he was none other than MSK whose eyes had widened with shock.

Maan was indeed agitated and worried.He was silent throughout the drive and Geet noticed it.

She kept her soft hand on his shoulder and called,”Maan?”

When he heard her immediately he hid his agitation and smiled at her broadly looking at her lovingly.

Geet asked,”Maan,what happened?U are silent!”

Maan pulled her on his lap and spoke softly,”Nope jaan!I was thinking of the position of our future love making!”

Geet blushed furiously and wacked him complaining,”Maan!”

He chuckled and snuggled her on his chest and pecked her forehead.His hands moved on her cute baby bump and felt a swift kick.Geet winced and he stroked her bump gently.Geet snuggled to his neck and he felt another baby kick.Geet dint wince but resisted the pain but her eyes showed the love towards the baby.They reached KM.Maan carried her in his arms looking at her intently while a red hue formed on her chubby cheeks.She was blushing furiously seeing his intense gaze.

Here in Singhania Mansion,

Pammi dialled to someone and said,”She’s healthy bebo!”

Someone said something from other side when Pammi spoke,”Listen,u still can become mother.U adopt Geet’s baby!She wont refuse u,if u ask her the baby!”

There was an angry response from other side when Pammi asked,”So u will lead ur life heirless till ur death Sameera.Listen to me,am trying to be good with Geet to get that baby.U adopt it.Am very jealous right now seeing her pregnant.I want u to be mother before her!”

There was an angry response from that side when Pammi said,”Yes,i hate her so much.Because she got everything in her life.Lovely husband and then now she gonna be a mother too!”

Sameera said angrily at once,”She has lost her first child and then she’s pregnant.For god sake,show mercy to her out of humanity!”And then she cut the call.Pammi said angrily keeping the receiver,”Why dont u understand that she can get pregnant once again but u cant for once also.”

Pammi turned and got a tight slap.Pammi was shocked seeing the man.There stood Sanjay seething with anger.Pammi held her cheek and asked,”How dare u slap me?”Sanjay was in so much anger that he gave another slap to her another cheek shouting,”I have dare,Pammi!”He strangled her neck and shouted,”I thought u changed but u never change.Atleast Sameera is remorsing for her deeds but u..u r doing mistakes after mistakes…crimes after crimes.U r an witch!”

Pammi forcefully freed his hands and coughed so much.After some time she too shouted at him,”So what am doing crime?That’s for my daughter am doing all this!”Sanjay slapped her once again and shouted,”Just shut up,Pammi!U dont have any pity on Geet’s condition.After losing her first baby miraculously she has become pregnant and u want to snatch the baby from her and give it to Sameera?Mark my words,Maan wont give u any oppurtunity!”

Pammi shouted,”I will make Geet to give the baby to Sameera!Because how much right Maan has on the baby that much right Geet too have.I will make her understand that Sameera cant conceive and assure her that her baby will be took care off!”

Sanjay was shocked hearing it.He knew that Geet was soft.She will melt in front of Pammi’s tears.Sanjay’s eyes spitted fire and his jaw tightened and his demeanor changed.Pammi noticed it and turned to face him.But his one word made her sag on the chair with shock.

Sanjay said to Pammi,”I think its time to give u divorce!”

He went away but he heard Pammi’s warning shouts,”If u divorce me then i will tell the court that u beat me everyday.U r abusing me!”

Sanjay too shouted angrily walking faster,”U do that and i will also tell that u abuse my niece always and hurt her mentally and emotionally.Am the sole reason for which my niece is alive or else she would’ve become myth if she was given on ur hands!”

Pammi shouted with fear,”U r not going to do that,do u hear me!”

Sanjay came outside and in anger he took the nearby weights which was used in exercise and threw it on TV and refrigerator which burst into million pieces.Everytime he feel she has changed he would get big shock seeing her demeanor.His eyes welled up and tears poured down from his 58th aged eyes.He was indeed hurt hearing Pammi’s words.To make her daughter happy,she was about to hurt her another daughter.Well she never thought that but still Geet was their daughter.How can she snatch her baby after all knowing what happened with her.Sanjay was fed up seeing Pammi’s behaviour and he needed break with that so he walked towards the KM to meet his baby god-sister Sahana.Whenever he would feel sad or alone he would go to Sahana.She would moralise him and would send him back.He wanted that to keep his head on her lap and let his stress out.

He came to KM and was led by Nakul to their study.Maan was in his office after tending his queen and making her sleep.So Sanjay dint disturb her.He saw her sleeping cutely holding her baby bump in her room and kissed her forehead lovingly.So he walked towards the study with Nakul.Nakul went leaving Sanjay near the door.Sanjay was about to enter when he heard Sahana’s and Veer’s conversations.

Sahana asked worriedly,”U sure that incident was an conspiracy?”

Veer said,”Yes Captain,i asked to Maan to explain the incident clearly and in presence of Sanjay uncle,Pammi aunty cant hurt Geet.That chandelier attack was for Pammi only not for Geet.Geet came between the Pammi and chandelier.”

Sahana asked,”Pammi is ok now?”

Veer said,”Yeah!”

On that time Sanjay asked entering inside,”What are u guys talking about?”

Both Sahana and Veer got silent seeing Sanjay there.Now Sahana was worried and asked,”What r u doing here veerji?”

Sanjay said,”I came to meet you choti!But what u guys are talking about!What’s with the chandelier attack?”

Sahana sighed and nodded to Veer to explain.

On that time in Singhania Mansion,Pammi felt restless feeling someone around her…keeping an eye on her.She knew that Sanjay has gone to Sahana and that made her angry.But now she was restless.On that time power went off.Pammi was scared and looked around her.Meanwhile she felt someone walking behind her.Luckily invertor was connected and it lit immediately and whole mansion got lit with light.On that time a man was standing behind her holding a sickle.Pammi sighed seeing the light but felt someone behind her.She turned and saw the face.She was shocked and the invertor light went off too as it got burst at once.

After few seconds,Pammi screamed!

Precap-Geet asked crying,”Maan,i want to see my chachiji.One last time,i want to see her face.Please take me!”

Maan said strictly,”No jaan,i cant take u!U r pregnant and that environment isnt fit for u!”

Geet begged,”Maan!”

But Maan dint listen to her and made her drink a glass of Milk forcefully.Geet drank it and after sometime she slept inside his chest.

Maan sighed and gently lifted her and made her sleep on the bed and pecked her forehead and said,”Am sorry jaan.Its not good to u to see a dead body which is brutally murdered!”

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It was night 9:30pm & a girl stood in the bus stop chewing gum.She was frustrated becoz of something.She twisted her fingers nervously & saw around her.She glanced to her right side where she dint get any trace of bus.

“Damn it”,She exclaimed & scowled & took the vibrating phone from her pocket.

She said hoarsely,”Hello!”That side was her step father who asked her harshly,”Ana,where the hell r u?Are u sleeping with someone?”Ana widened her eyes hearing her step-father’s questions & said angrily,”Yeah..what is it concern to u?”

Her step father said,”Dont talk to me like that..answer me truly!”Ana said angrily,”When u dont have any trust on me then why do u ask questions..go on assume whatever u think,i dont care!”She disconnected the phone before he ask further harsh questions.

Ana said to herself stuffing the mobile in her back pant pocket,”He dont have the guts to work & feed the family but have the guts to complain abt me or nag…what have i deserved to be to get this life..where i have to feed 10 people in my family with my salary..& damn my boss..he’s getting advantage of this..what do my family knows that,what is going on with me!Everyone are ready to complain abt me that’s all!”

She remembered the incident which went on few hours back in office……


Ana was sitting working in her table when she felt a strong hand.She was scared & got up & turned to get her boss Jack Hyde.

Jack smiled & slowly snaked his arms around her waist while Ana said,”Now isnt the time Jack…am getting late!”

Jack said,”How much u will make me wait Ana..am desperate for u!”

Ana gave a small smile which dint reach her eye & her mind was racing once again & she definitely wanted to save herself from Jack so she said slowly playing with her shirt button & said,”Let my sister Kate get degree & after that i will be half free from responsibility & then we will be free to do whatever u like!”

Jack’s smile widened & asked with lustful smile,”Really?”Ana said smiling,”Ya!”

Jack said,”Then give my a kiss for life!”

Ana’s palm fisted & she felt the displeasure so she stood in tip toe to reach his lips when they heard the mobile ringing & Jack went to receive when Ana breathed calmly & said to Jack,”Am going home Jack!”And immediately walked in fast pace without waiting for his answer.


Ana’s eyes welled up cant able to resist the sorrow but immediately wiped it hearing the horn & looked up.It wasnt bus but a Black color Audi moving past her.She was disappointed while the driver & passenger of the Audi saw her.Ana turned that side & tried to take a glimpse of her bus when she saw the passenger peeking from his back seat glass.He did glance her & passed.After sometime a pack of bike riders came on the way when they saw Ana standing & stopped the bike.They thought that she’s single while Ana got panic seeing their advances.She saw around her & saw the very same Audi which had stopped when it had passed past her.

She immediately ran towards the car & sat inside the car opening it.She was so panicked that she dint see a man sitting inside.The driver & the passenger were shocked to see her when Ana said,”Please help me!”The car driver was alarmed & was abt to take his gun when the passenger stopped him.Ana turned & saw the man & her jaw dropped.OMG he’s so young,”Ana thought,”Probably a year older than her or two!”He had bright grey eyes which were luminous in the moon light he had long white nose with sculpted full lips.It was so beautiful mouth fully sculpted as if god had carved it himself.It was so sensual.Ana’s mouth went dry seeing him while he glanced & saw the bike riders had surrounded the car.The man said,”Tayor,call the cops!”

Ana said scared of her step-dad,”No no..please help me but dont call cops!”She dint wanted to embarass her so called step father with all this.He glanced at her & said,”Taylor,move on the car!”Taylor nodded & immediately he started the car with full force that the bike riders scattered away scared of hit & taking the oppurtunity Taylor moved the car very fast from there.

Ana was still glancing his sulpted lips which spoke to her,”Who are they Ana?”

Ana was shocked & asked,”How do u know my name?”He pointed towards her badge & said,”From your badge!”Ana said,”Oh!”

He glanced at her shrewdly & asked,”Where i leave u?”Ana said nervously,”Portland”He said,”Taylor!”Taylor said,”Sir!”He turned & asked,”Are u ok?”Ana nodded politely to him that she’s ok but still she cant able to distract herself from his sculpted lips.She thought of biting those lips & this thought made her squirm softly.He heard it & asked,”Are u hungry?”He saw towards her stomach when she immediately retreated back inside the seat closing ehr stomach.Her movement made him amused while Ana asked abruptly,”Your good name please!”

He glanced & said,”Oh..i dint introduce myself..am Christian Grey!”He gave his hand to shake when she saw that she took it & shook it.But she felt a current run her spine feeling his touch.She glanced at his sculpted mouth which was distracting her but she also glanced his windows of his soul…those grey eyes which were so expressive & amazing color.She felt to drown herself in those steely depths but composed herself when the car had stopped.She glanced & said,”This is not Portland!”

Christian said politely,”Yes it is not as we have to reach it after one hour..am hungry so i stopped..if u can then join me or else u can go from here..Taylor will drop u nearby bus stop!”Ana glanced her watched which was 10 now & she needed to reach home very soon so said,”No i’ll take to bus..thank u for saving me & letting me share ur car for few hourse journey Mr.Grey!”

Christian said with attitude,”You are welcome Miss Steele.Taylor leave Miss Steele to the nearby bus stop & come & collect me!Am gonna have dinner till then!”Taylor nodded politely while Ana sat back inside the car.Christain went inside the restaurant while Taylor moved on towards the nearby bus stop.

Ana took the bus from there while Taylor reach the very same restaurant & picked Christain up.Christain said softly,”Taylor,Dig about her!”


Note-I want to dedicate this story to both ELJames the author of 50 shades of grey & Sylvia Day the author of crossfire series.

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